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Have you heard it lately?
The sweet, gentle sound
that sweeps and touches
your soul
into a whole
new different place
where all is possible
and there's nothing
but smiles and laughter,
a certain joy in forever
in you.

Butterflies
and wispy clouds
float in sky-blue skies;
twinkling stars
and whisking comets
that fall and rise
with every breath
and everything,
a rising crescendo
does your heart sing;
Have you heard it lately?
A search for happiness, or something close.
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chamunan Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2003
Thatpoem is just too happy for me. :D (Big Grin)
But it's still good.
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bravesville Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2003
Damn, that's amazing, and writen so fucking effortlessly. I love this. great work.

+favs

-- peace easy
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arleetec Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2002
I agree wih coop. I just love reading your poems teef. It just makes me start to think of all these thoughts I have bottled up inside my mind.
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cooper Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2002
not lately but I have heard it many a time, lots of time after reading your lovely writings. :O (Eek) keep up the wonderful work I hope things are well with u, take care :O (Eek)
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teop Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2002
a faithful reminder to the things we often overlook. we often get so caught up in our own personal microcosms that a simple look at the sky above can remind us how much more there is to life. excellent words.
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keen Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2002   Writer
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a fine, beautiful read tiff. ta!


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skyOrange Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002
yes :) (Smile)

this is a welcome change from your usual, Tiff. but as with all your other poems, this one contains heart.
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-tank Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002
wish i had...this is amazingly written...the overall happiness or almost bliss that this poem radiates is amazing
-tank

-=don't fear to imagine=-
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dreamz13 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002
I haven't heard that sweet and gentle sound lately but I hope that you have heard it and perhaps then I might be able to share in your joy then.
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savis Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002  Hobbyist General Artist
I only hear it when it rains... your words are great for bringing me to those sweet moments and lifting the veil of darkness in front of my eyes.
*Major hugs*
// A
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ekud Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002  Professional Digital Artist
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you write so beautifully tiff.... i really like this one...

+favlove
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urbanparadox Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002
i didn't heard it lately :( (Sad) . great job tho.
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thelambofgod Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002   Writer
not your usual style. a welcomed change. i like. but perhaps it a bit too general, and i feel it lacks that one and only wooz touch.
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adrift Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2002
yes, for a couple of seconds. and i can float when reading this.
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gaston Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2002
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nope, haven't heard it either, which makes me appreciate the beauty of this poem even more.
it seems like such soothing sounds, sights and setting is what a lot of people need right now, perhaps even just to experience simply in the imagination. so thanks for sharing this ethereal flow of wonderful imagery - you're doing a lot a delightful spiritual favor.

peace.
+g
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h-hour Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2002
no, i havent heard it lately. but i also havent heard that sound that drags things away and leaves everything cold and brittle, so i can be thankful for something. :) (Smile)

I like that you start and end the poem on the same line. I think it works well. Both stanzas are quite individual and strong in completely different ways. nice (glad to see you taking an active part around here. how's that deviantmessage list coming? :) (Smile) )
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saige Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2002
I don't know if I've told you this, but your poetry is the only poetry I read. I'm not much of a poetry reader, but when you write, it's different than anything else.

Once again, I envy your ability to use words like this, almost to the point of furious rage and anger, ok, no. =p (Razz)

Good to see something from you too, haven't gotten my woozster fix. :) (Smile)


One thing too, the lines your soul into a whole, I loved that one, just rolled off of my tongue really well. :D (Big Grin)
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enigmatic Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2002
I have. Its gone now, but I heard it for a brief moment of bliss.
nice work!
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