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Stephanie~
11th June 2001
1.24am

Stop and recall the days gone by
The years seemed to pass in a blink of an eye
Each and every day I see
Passing swiftly right by me
Hours, minutes, seconds in time
A tribute to my friend I try to rhyme
Now and then we keep in touch
Innocence in life we lose much
Even so, through it all, you were there
Guess we always had much to share
Opposites in every way
How did we stick together night after day?
Sweet and funny, a friendship so true
Over and over, I turn to you
One special friend I trust most of all
Kin you're not, but I'll always call
Love and faith go hand in hand
In our friendship where we stand
New friends we have but each we don't forget
God was kind when we first met.
:iconwoozster:
My buddy since I was 15, she worried the hell out of me for years, drove me up the wall with crazy tricks, introduced me to all her bfs for my "stamp of approval" (AFTER she got together with them, mind), brought me along when she went for dates (??), drove me around town wherever I needed to go whenever possible, baked cakes with me, introduced me to devart *grin*, made me laugh when I thought I was failing in university, stood by me through my crazy obsession with bears... if you've ever had a close buddy, you'd know what I'm talkin' about.
This is simply the least I can do, and while it may be a late gesture, sooks, it's about bloody time and I love you to bits *hug*

P/S: The challenge of this poem is simply her name which runs down the left side (read vertically) ie. the first letter of every sentence forms her name :P (Razz)
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:iconcep:
Very very nice acrostic poem. Very subtle, I don't think I would of even noticed it if you didn't point it out in your description. Emotion conveyed very well. I wish I had the talent to to show my appreciation to my friends in such an emotive form.
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~savis Jun 11, 2001  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazong work woozie. I wish I could write something equally beautiful about my friends. The way every sentence have meaning and carries the poem forward is outstanding.

Savis
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Pain is inevitable
Suffering is optional
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:iconarleetec:
AMAZING, let me spell it out for you again A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. True writng talent here. I love the last line. Glad that you have a friend like that, we all need friends like that. Oh and it would be even better if they looked like fuzzy. =D (Big Grin)
I give you Thumbs Up x 5

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:iconfuzzys:
OMG Tiff..!!! This is soooooooooo amazing.. I'm sooooooooo touched.. hehe.. you're the bestest!! *muakzzzzz*

:fuzzys:
http://www.absolutely-fuzzy.com
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:iconcooper:
be u t ful. quite astounding, keep writing ur poetry my friend..... its good :) (Smile)

@coop@
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:iconxenotron:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.


thats so cute.



if i tried to make a poem that rhymes it just sucks..well done...

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:iconvm:
aaah that's great :D (Big Grin) I've been lucky enough to have a friend like that, and you've described the relationship perfectly :]

great job.



p.s.:I love Stephanie too!! ; )

Makeshift
http://www.makeshift.ca
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