Perfect Love
If I should say that perfect love exists
Then I’d be lying to you and to me
‘tis lust disguised, not easy to resist
And bound in chains while thinking he was free.
The quest for perfect love is hard, unfair,
It is more than just proclaiming “I care”
'tis not elusive, tis' not even there
'tis just a beautiful dream we all share.
There’s no such thing as sweet perfect love
‘tis all lies, an impossibility
‘tis the wise who realize that from above
Amid the heavens, in all God’s glory;
Perfect love is divine, as the dawn breaks;
Human love is filled with flaws and mistakes.
Well done.
I would like permission to add this to my favorites devpack please.
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if we should memorize this and say it over and over until we believed it
perhaps we should write it in our palm so we see it when we reach to touch another
it's ancient, decided, unclear to the innocent and yet...painfully true.
your poem is perceptive and well done
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That's a great poem wooz..wich I can relate to so much, because i've been hurt so much by that mysterious "Quest for the perfect Love" before..and I realise now that the words you speak here are true, in some way..
The eternal romantic in me says there is such a thing, but the "Real world" is telling me a different story..
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"Human love is filled with flaws and mistakes."
not only is that one of the truest lines i have ever read but it fits so wonderfully at the end of this piece, it's so matter of fact, perfect.
when confronted with hate and ignorance, one must liquify.